STORY BEATS
1. soldier gorilla in a jungle, middle of warzone
2. flashbacks of past in reverse order until final one triggers him to…
3. …remember past
4. chooses to go back to nature
PROBLEMS TO BE SOLVED
FLASHBACKS
-what triggers them?
-why is this particular gorilla special enough to be triggered?
-what are they about, specifically? (all flashbacks should probably be of things that happen before he’s become a soldier)
BUILDING TENSION
-what can we do to create a feeling of urgency?
-how can we make this urgency get more urgent?
-what is at stake here?
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