Friday, October 24, 2008

STORY?!

guysssssssss
how about


-inside helicopter, gorilla sees bird (establish he always wants freedom!)
-fight humans
-explosion
-Lead01 wakes up, not mind-controlled
-walks around, sad, sniffing dead teammates
-hears human trying to fire at him (the gun's not working though), turns around, sees gun, slips back to WAR MODEEE
-chasing, chasing--but then loses human! human is hiding in jungle foliage
-Lead01 starts blasting fire from his flamegun, clearing the trees to find the human
-animals living in the forest start coming out, scared, running
-human is hiding behind a tree, scared too, watching gorilla
-gorilla feels bad, wants to stop burning forest--but implant prevents him!
-hates implant, struggles, rips out implant
-becomes a regular, nonviolent gorilla
-human sees this, takes the chance to come out and kill gorilla
-gorilla lies there dying, and sees a free bird fly overhead, smiles briefly.


no flashbacks needed, strong motivation to get rid of implant, climatic ending with lots of fire and atmosphere change (green in beginning, red in end). what do you guys think?

or do you guys have different endings prepared?
what are your events that lead from controlled gorilla --> free gorilla? what are your reasons for gorilla hating being controlled? any ideas?

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