Sunday, February 8, 2009

Workbooking

Hey guys just wanted to post up what ive been workin on to see what people think. Not complete but will be for tommorow so any thing you would like me to change let me know and if you like/dont like anything let me know as well! Hope everything is goin well at school today.
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Rob Finlay said...

Hey Dave,

Looks like it's coming along. The action is framed nicely, although I think the vine hanging overhead might be a little distracting. It might be better to incorporate the hanging vines as a repeating element throughout the bg, and maybe move the vine off-centre a bit. Likewise, I might try to define what's happening immediately behind the two a little more...add in some foliage/trees etc. between them and the mountains. Anyway, we can talk about anything else when we're at school, just some first impressions, but it's looking good, dude!

February 8, 2009 at 11:17 PM

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